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PonyVille Darkness Mysteries - Page 27 by Mrbrunoh1 PonyVille Darkness Mysteries - Page 27 by Mrbrunoh1
Chapter 1: Welcome To PonyVille - Page 27

Love the FeedBack, to know whether they liked the style of my comics

PVDM - Pony Ville Darkness Mysteries by: Mrbrunoh1

MLP: FIM Characters is Own of Hasbro
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:iconltblackcoat:
LTblackcoat Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
looking good (art and story), but recommend improved English.
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Mrbrunoh1 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
okey, I'm trying to make it as clear as possible, thanks for the feedback :D
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:iconltblackcoat:
LTblackcoat Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
Its OK mate, after all in fairness there is nothing %100 unreadable so frankly you are doing well and seriously the plot does seem interesting.

Really its simple mistakes like "front"(faceing) when you mean "forward"(motion).

Glad to help.
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Mrbrunoh1 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for your feedback, they help to improve, thanks
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:iconltblackcoat:
LTblackcoat Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
:iconajnapplz: *hat tip* most welcome.
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hazeltopaz Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Teamwork!
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Mrbrunoh1 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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